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Also. Ich weiß dass das hier kein "Hausaufgaben-korrigier" Forum ist. Ich bitte nur dass mir jemand meine Zusammenfassung einer Kurzgeschichte korrigiert, da diese Zusammenfassung das Thema meiner morgigen Schularbeit sein wird.
Es ist eine Zusammenfassung einer Szene aus der Kurzgeschichte "The killers".
Ich bitte nur darum dass die Rechtschreib und Grammatikfehler korrigiert werden. Wenn jemand die Absätze anders setzen würde, wäre ich um Hilfe froh. Die Geschichte selbst ist in der Vergangenheit geschrieben deshalb auch so zusammengefasst. Bitte kein sinnloses "Dein Englisch ist kacke bla bla", ich gehe erst in die 6te(in Deutschland die 10te) Klasse.
The killers
Nick walked up the street beside the car-tracks and turned at the next arc-light down a side street. Three houses up the street was Hirsch’s rooming-house. Nick pushed the bell and asked if he could see Ole Andreson. Mrs Bell brought him to the room at the end of a corridor.
Nick opened the door and went into the room. Ole Andreson was laying on the bed with all his clothes on. He did not look at Nick. He lay with his head on two pillows and was to tall for the bed.
Nick told him that two men came to Henry’s lunchroom and tied up him and the nigger. Ole Andreson didn’t react. When Nick said that they want to kill him(Ole Andreson), Ole said that there isn’t anything he could do about it. Moreover he said that he was through with all that running around. It seemed like he accepted his fate. Ole always talked with the same flat voice. He just thanked Nick for coming around and then Nick went out.
Danke
Es ist eine Zusammenfassung einer Szene aus der Kurzgeschichte "The killers".
Ich bitte nur darum dass die Rechtschreib und Grammatikfehler korrigiert werden. Wenn jemand die Absätze anders setzen würde, wäre ich um Hilfe froh. Die Geschichte selbst ist in der Vergangenheit geschrieben deshalb auch so zusammengefasst. Bitte kein sinnloses "Dein Englisch ist kacke bla bla", ich gehe erst in die 6te(in Deutschland die 10te) Klasse.
The killers
Nick walked up the street beside the car-tracks and turned at the next arc-light down a side street. Three houses up the street was Hirsch’s rooming-house. Nick pushed the bell and asked if he could see Ole Andreson. Mrs Bell brought him to the room at the end of a corridor.
Nick opened the door and went into the room. Ole Andreson was laying on the bed with all his clothes on. He did not look at Nick. He lay with his head on two pillows and was to tall for the bed.
Nick told him that two men came to Henry’s lunchroom and tied up him and the nigger. Ole Andreson didn’t react. When Nick said that they want to kill him(Ole Andreson), Ole said that there isn’t anything he could do about it. Moreover he said that he was through with all that running around. It seemed like he accepted his fate. Ole always talked with the same flat voice. He just thanked Nick for coming around and then Nick went out.
Danke